Sweet, new Dovahbear!
You really shouldn't upload flash WIPs that don't function properly, let alone WIPs in general, but that's ok.
A little critique:
The dialogue could use a good bit of fine-tuning and the pace slowed down a notch or two. I found the text a little wonky with the way it'd go behind the character icons, so that too could be worked on.
I hope when you're finished your friend (and others) enjoy your flash!
It was worth the wait. <3
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